"Thank you so much for your insightful suggestions and eagle eye! I am trying to think up ways to up the tension, perhaps by having harriet be more actively bullied. You gave me a lot to think about and I am grateful!" - Suzanne Holland

“I loved your insightful comments and professional critique. I had gone as far as I could by myself, yet I knew this story could be made better. You have aimed me in the right direction to make this story really ready for submission. I also appreciate being able to ask questions for further clarification. I feel you have really helped me in a way no one else has. You were clear and above all, patient yet professional.”

-Sally Phillips

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"Thank you for your kind words. I feel that your service was a very valuable experience. After I read your critique, I was disapointed that the manuscript needs so much revising, but I am also very excited to have this opertunity to make it better. I stayed up half of the night writing notes and thinking of ways to put your advice to action. With your helpful suggestions I am confident that I will be able to bring my characters to life. I am very encouraged and inspired, I appricate your help." -Darrin

"Some time ago, you critiqued my children's picture book text, "Edward the Bear and the Willow Treasures" I am just writing to thank you for those comments and to let you know that the publisher I sent the story to liked the story. They have made some recommendations and have requested a rewrite. . . I am hoping that the publisher would not have taken the time to request a rewrite unless they were seriously considering the story for publication." - Jeff Doherty